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Silence
In the heat of the day
It begins

A slow lope to a rapid dash
Leaves scarce gazed in passing
Wrist blades unsheathing in a flash
Primed and poised for slashing

From tree to tree I leap
Muscles tensed and slim
Seamlessly traversing, lunar jungles deep
Sunlight coloured and dim

I smell

She's near
The princess of this world
Of creatures so close yet queer

Luminescent skin of deep sea blue
Hunters all
Even women, warriors too
And thus I await her fall

The decent from the sky
Upon her winged beast
It's letting her fly
Escape the attempted feast..
This is the extreamly late and in my personal opinion, not overly well done for the moment, part of my trade with the very patient and tollerant =ziba, again I appoligise about quality and due lateness of the work but I felt it nessicery it was finished for the most part, I'll definatly be comming back to this to fix it up and extend ^.^' :jsenn: :blackrose:
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RedAventador Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow, you have amazing talent at poetry!
Seriously, this is very intense and really sucks you in, very well written!
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carlosfonteira Featured By Owner May 29, 2011
How beautiful!
Gives me some strange urge to begin running in a forest.
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striders484 Featured By Owner May 29, 2011  Student Writer
is that sarcasm..? <.< >.>
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carlosfonteira Featured By Owner May 29, 2011
No, don't seems so but I'm serious 0_0'
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ziba Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww thank you so much! ^^ It was worth waiting for :3

I don't think there is a lack of quality, its actually really good already :)

Thank you
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striders484 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Student Writer
Heh thankee kindly regardless ^.^' I'll start playing more AVP and see if I can get into a better writting mind set for it ^.^ ':jsenn::blackrose:
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